Feedback from presentation - Changes Made

During the presentation advise was given on how to improve on my work. I took all this into account and made all the changes advised. They were the following:

• Add an axonometric drawing to the materials analysis to give a better view of my reworked model.



• add text describing the material in my materials anaylsis



• add text describing the spaces in the Maison A Bordeaux and My reworked version in the public and private spaces.



• Add a section that runs through the diagonal of my reworked version of Maison A Bordeaux to give a better idea of the building and its structure.