Maison A Bordeaux - Feedback from presentation & Changes Made

During the presentation of my plans I was given feedback on the execution of my work, and given critisims on where i could improve. I have taken the advise on board and tried to improve my work in the areas discussed. I had an understanding the the presice analysis of the circulation, landscape and structure should be represented individually, however was advised during the presentation that this was not the case. I was asked to:

• combine my landscape analysis with my floor plans


• represent the cave like nature of the ground floor on my floor plans with the use of shading in style with my landscape plans


• Represent the earth on my sections with similar shading techniques


• change the hatching on a column so It was not so overpowering. * reduce the size of my circulation plans


• add the detail of the holes to the structural plan and my axonometric renderings


• Correct a small mistake with the positioning of the structural elements in my structural analysis.

Since the presentation, I have taken all these critisims on board and corrected the mistakes. I hope now they are to the standard that was expected of us.